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The land has been torn and savaged, simple sounds have become a certain death to some, where as to others, they have simply just been penalized. It is not certain what happened to this once peaceful and harmonic world, but one thing is for certain, Jesus is watching us!
    This world now had became quiet, not even a whisper is allowed to be uttered, or punishment will rain down from the sky, thus making it a longer and harder trip to level up. Imagine yourself upon a road, it is a dangerous road as you do not know what lurks behind each corner, the simplest squeak and your plucked off your feet and thrown back the way you came, thus increasing the amount of time it takes to reach your destination, which of course, is your next level!
    Nobody knows what the highest level is, nor does no one  know of how long a journey it is too get to that level! But low and behold, these brave players now idle too see if they are able to prevail in this deadly task of… being quiet!
     A rumour has been heard that judgement day came, the laughter and happiness was drained and only silence was allowed. The reason for increasing your level? To again find the laughter and enjoy the rest of your days in a certain paradise! But of course, only Jesus knows of  the level needed to succeed, and as of yet, I don’t believe that he has expressed the level needed!
    So I bid to thee, idlers, dwellers of this realm. Do not be afraid to be silent, but be afraid to make a noise!  You do not want to be among those who do not make it too paradise now!
                                                               Do you?
©2008-2009 ~MadSpyke
:iconmadspyke:

Author's Comments

Well... i can't draw, so i thought i'd try my hand at writing... i logged into one of the 'chat' rooms and low and behold it was an rpg thingy XD
they have a competition, i realise there will be people entering that have a great knowledge of literature :) but hey... worth a try isnt it? lols... i dont even know what one of the prizes is XD!!!

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:icontenri:
I don't know why, but this made me smile. Probably because when I play games I spend waaay too much of my time levelling up. Nice attempt at writing, it was really good. ^_^

Good luck with the contest.

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"And the universe just vanished out of sight,
And all the stars collapsed behind the pitch black night."

Warmer Climate - Snow Patrol
:iconmadspyke:
Lmao, this will be an epic fail :P but thankyou so much for your support XD!
im gonna guess... my little attempts at certain humour made you laugh and not the poor writing xD!

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Hey i can't draw :P So ignore me if you must :D

What I Say Is What I Mean,
So If I Say What I Mean Is Not What I Said,
Then I Guess I Dont Mean What I Said,
And What I'm Saying Is That I'm Being Mean?

Yeah... i confused myself with that one to
:icontenri:
Yup, 'cos your writing isn't poor at all. ^_^

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"And the universe just vanished out of sight,
And all the stars collapsed behind the pitch black night."

Warmer Climate - Snow Patrol
:iconmadspyke:
Lol, your just saying that so i'll be nice XD!!!
i see what your trying too do >__>

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Hey i can't draw :P So ignore me if you must :D

What I Say Is What I Mean,
So If I Say What I Mean Is Not What I Said,
Then I Guess I Dont Mean What I Said,
And What I'm Saying Is That I'm Being Mean?

Yeah... i confused myself with that one to
:iconberthalaban:
Haha nice :P Hardly any mistakes :O
You described things so well there :P nice metaphors and "big words" :D
lol rpg

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:bulletred: RAWR~
:icontenri:
*laughs* No, I genuinely meant it. XD

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"And the universe just vanished out of sight,
And all the stars collapsed behind the pitch black night."

Warmer Climate - Snow Patrol
:iconmadspyke:
Lol... hardly any mistakes >__> well thanks for not *stares* >__>

:P lmao, i do suck at writing stuff so i was a little surprised, only prob was... it was 600 words or less, i just dont know if i should've made it 599 words ;) but im lazy and couldnt be arsed XD!!! (can you tell im english? arse? lmao!!! :P)

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Hey i can't draw :P So ignore me if you must :D

What I Say Is What I Mean,
So If I Say What I Mean Is Not What I Said,
Then I Guess I Dont Mean What I Said,
And What I'm Saying Is That I'm Being Mean?

Yeah... i confused myself with that one to
:iconmadspyke:
XD well i read some of your writing... some of the words i couldnt even understand... lmfao!
so if your being genuine then im happy XD!!!
<3

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Hey i can't draw :P So ignore me if you must :D

What I Say Is What I Mean,
So If I Say What I Mean Is Not What I Said,
Then I Guess I Dont Mean What I Said,
And What I'm Saying Is That I'm Being Mean?

Yeah... i confused myself with that one to
:icontenri:
:giggle: I believe I'm a bit of a walking dictionary.

:)

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"And the universe just vanished out of sight,
And all the stars collapsed behind the pitch black night."

Warmer Climate - Snow Patrol
:iconberthalaban:
Hm, from what I see, that's pretty good. But im not surprised. *surprise surprise* XD That thing is 600 words? :O

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:bulletred: RAWR~

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